Prose has become prosaic. Time for some poetry now. Well, this is one of my favourite poems. wrote it on a bus ride(29 C) through the by-lanes of Chennai. So here goes -
INDIAN CROWDS
They smell so weird, you say
They smell so exotic, I say
They look grotesque, you say
They are the epitomes of beauty, I say
They are overbearingly affectionate, you say
They have big warm hearts, I say
They chatter incessantly, you say
They are the most interesting speakers, I say
They are dumb beyond words, you say
They are prodigies and geniuses, I say
They make much ado about nothing, you say
They live each day to the fullest, I say
They celebrate every silly occasion, you say
They celebrate the joy of living, I say
They think not twice before conversing with a stranger, you say
They are the most welcoming souls of all in this world, I say
They know not of a word called caution, you say
In god they trust and to him leave the rest, I say
They have the messiest houses of all, you say
Oh! But the most beautiful homes of all, I say
They poke their noses in everyone's business, you say
They are the most genuinely concerned of all, I say
Oh! But they are perpetually surrounded by murk, you say
Oh! But they are the lotus in the swamps, I say
Damn them, they are but brown idiotic Asians, you say
Hail them, they are the great Indian Crowds, I say
----- Shilpa Krishnan
Saturday, March 04, 2006
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8 comments:
awesome babe...
great... brilliant... all the second line in ur poem is jus truly indians nature..
proud to be an indian:-)
hey shil.. i already told u.. this is ur best poem ever
looking forward to more
cheers
swat
nivi: thankoo so much. even me quite proud to be an Indian.
swathi: shall definitely post more. so watch out for a downpour of poetry (if u care to call it that)
hey what babe? following that stupid manasi s formula??? one reply for each and everyone s comment a?
Very nice and refreshing. Gives the much vaunted Indian essence to our being.
Keep writing!!!
Sanju
nivi: yup dear.
sanju: thankoo. and i sure will continue. do post more often on your blog.
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